Note: This is one of my earliest attempts to achieve “significance,” albeit autobiographical. It dates from the 1960s. At that time I had not overcome the influence of the archaic language of the literature of the 16th through 19th centuries in which I had immersed myself. In this case the slightly convoluted syntax expresses in part the conceit. Some readers might discern the influence of G. M. Hopkins as well as that of earlier poets.
Now I the anti-Jacob night-long lie
wrestling with my dark angel for my soul:
there is no hold he does not know—and I,
so subtly does he intertwine with mine
his limbs, so wreathe him close, I cannot breathe
but for his breathing.
Better like Isaac in the waste bound, blind,
Waiting the knife’s sure stroke should God provide
no help, than wake to taste
the old salt of defeat and loss again....
Or might I by some grace be purified?
Oh no—from bed to wall I turn my face
and take another fall.
